首先，在托福独立写作中，我们少不了对论点提供例证。在举例子的时候，我们首先要注意的问题是用词的正式性。成 都 雷 哥 托 福 的小 雷 哥今天带大家来看看写作怎么花式做。
先来看一下下面这句句子：
Fast food has a high content of fat and sugar which can lead to serious health issues, like obesity and cardiac diseases, when eaten in quantity.
作者对serious health issues 引出例子时用的是like，就像很多同学一样。但是like一般只用于对话和口语中，出现在作文中会显得很不正式。所以建议换成 such as 或者 namely。
其次，大多数同学习惯的模式是：先写出观点句，然后给出几个例子。但总是用这个模式，会显得表达不够多样化， 所以同学们可以尝试着把例子提前。
Obesity and cardiac diseases are typical examples of the health issues that can be faced by people who regularly consume food with a high fat and sugar content.
......are typical examples of
......can serve as compelling examples of
最后，使用exemplify 来举例子。比较一下以下两个举例子的句子：
An increasing number of people are eating unhealthy food regardless of the health warnings.
1.For example, about 70% of people working in the U.S. resort to buying ready-made meals for convenience rather than doing home cooking.
2. This is exemplified by the 70% of working people in the U.S. who resort to buying ready-made meals for convenience.
是不是第二句看起来更加简洁和高大上了一点呢？
总结一下：
1.在托福独立写作中，不可以使用like来举例子
2. 不要总是使用 for example来引出例子。用For instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, to give a clear example...就可以在不改变语法结构的情况下直接替换for example。在写完作文以后，回过头浏览一遍，用这些词替换重复的for example
3. 通过......are typical examples of ；......can serve as compelling examples of等句式，来强调突出你的例子， 还能使句式更多样化。
4. exemplify可以用来突出你想进一步展开的例子，进一步体现你的表达的多样化
标签： 举例子的句子
